The Dragon of truth sleeping
See him on the land of men
See him on the skies of truth
Only sky will cry over the land
Only the Dragon is sleeping above every hand
His eyes full of oceans
His ankles kissing the chains
His tongue is within the cages
Spears of death in his skin
A shining star on his eye
Crying out loud for the sky
Chain was not ashamed of himself?
But feared the light of true self!
Who were raised day by day!
Freedom, yelling tongue in the cage
but no one hears him, only the pages
What do you think this poem means?
I think it talks about a nation who could not recognize his power but they others can see him and it's really a great poem pleas tell us the author.
Reply:its powerfull as hell
Reply:Same as first person. Where did you get it?
Reply:I would love to know where you got this poem. I tried to google it and guess what I got. Your question. lol! It is pretty darn powerful.
Reply:Who wrote it?
It seems a bit disjointed... the extended metaphor gets jumbled and i dont think its done well... is it by a published poet... a good one??
Its full of trigger words that make it jerky and emotional but in terms of form, the rhymes seem forced, dragon of truth in skies for truth seems dumb.. ankles kissing chains is a silly image... i cant take it seriously and the meter most lines are prose at best... the cliches are hitting me over the head...
It doesnt mean anything... its trying too hard to be profound.. and to be a poem for that matter... it screems l"ook at me im a poem!!"
OH Noooooo Please tell me this isnt a poet i respect... :(
Reply:Sounds like an anaolgy to Jesus
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