Quick analysis help? What I see so far is that this is a woman who is scared to show her love outright, so she does it in the dark. I KNOW I am missing stuff. But can't seem to delve much further into it. Been on a weird poetry kick lately.I'd just like to make sure I am getting all the author is saying.
Thanks much for your help!!
"First Poem for You"
I like to touch your tattoos in complete
darkness, when I can’t see them. I’m sure of
where they are, know by heart the neat
lines of lightning pulsing just above
your nipple, can find, as if by instinct, the blue
swirls of water on your shoulder where a serpent
twists, facing a dragon. When I pull you
to me, taking you until we’re spent
and quiet on the sheets, I love to kiss
the pictures in your skin. They’ll last until
you’re seared to ashes; whatever persists
or turns to pain between us, they will still
be there. Such permanence iis terrifying.
So I touch them in the dark; but touch them, trying.
Help interpreting a sonnet?
its good, but i dont think it flows like a sonnet should. it should have iambic pantameter, going stressed, unstressed . . . five time in a line with the syllables!
Reply:She feels the connection with the tatoos, they are permanent and will always be there, even when the lovers are no longer together. She shares her love with his tatoos and they will never deny her, and will always hold her feelings. Just another thought.
Saturday, April 24, 2010
What do i have2 take or do if i alredy when to the doctor & he told me that im fine but my stomuch is hurting?
I when to three different doctors to get some medicine to or to make me a check out in my body to see what is wrong with me because I’m not been eating well for at least a years and I have loss of appetite, energy lost weight loss fever chills Blurred vision Brown Spots can't go back to sleep Eat often or else faint/nervous eyes get puffy Lower back pain Sexual desire decreased Varicose veins skin discolorations Nose bleeds abdominal pain, nausea Sometimes nausea in mornings, Sometimes nausea in evenings, Sometimes excess salivation Frequent poor appetite, Dragon breath" in morning Craves sweets, Weakness
What do i have2 take or do if i alredy when to the doctor %26amp; he told me that im fine but my stomuch is hurting?
i know you have already tried but keep going to a different doctor until one can help you. it may have to be in a different county, town, city etc.
i had severe abdminal pain for about 4 months, seen five or six different doctors. but my mistake was going to different doctors within the same building. they were talking about me, telling one another there was nothing wrong. i left that network of doctors and within two weeks i had an answer.
always always question authority.
as for your abdominal pain...it sounds like alot of possible things and i am sure you have tried taking various antiacids etc. so go to a doctor and they can prescribe you a medicine that will actually coat your stomach so it shouldnt hurt anymore if, that is what is actually causing your pain.
get well soon
What do i have2 take or do if i alredy when to the doctor %26amp; he told me that im fine but my stomuch is hurting?
i know you have already tried but keep going to a different doctor until one can help you. it may have to be in a different county, town, city etc.
i had severe abdminal pain for about 4 months, seen five or six different doctors. but my mistake was going to different doctors within the same building. they were talking about me, telling one another there was nothing wrong. i left that network of doctors and within two weeks i had an answer.
always always question authority.
as for your abdominal pain...it sounds like alot of possible things and i am sure you have tried taking various antiacids etc. so go to a doctor and they can prescribe you a medicine that will actually coat your stomach so it shouldnt hurt anymore if, that is what is actually causing your pain.
get well soon
What do i have to take or do when i alreay when to the doctor % he tokd me that im fine & this are my syntom?
I when to three different doctors to get some medicine to or to make me a check out in my body to see what is wrong with me because I’m not been eating well for at least a years and I have loss of appetite, energy lost weight loss fever chills Blurred vision Brown Spots can't go back to sleep Eat often or else faint/nervous eyes get puffy Lower back pain Sexual desire decreased Varicose veins skin discolorations Nose bleeds abdominal pain, nausea Sometimes nausea in mornings, Sometimes nausea in evenings, Sometimes excess salivation Frequent poor appetite, Dragon breath" in morning Craves sweets, Weakness
What do i have to take or do when i alreay when to the doctor % he tokd me that im fine %26amp; this are my syntom?
asking the same question over and over isn't going to help. If a doctor says there is nothing wrong with you, take it as a blessing. try and relax, eat well, and relax.
Go for a massage or reiki therapy if you want. either will help ease your stress
What do i have to take or do when i alreay when to the doctor % he tokd me that im fine %26amp; this are my syntom?
asking the same question over and over isn't going to help. If a doctor says there is nothing wrong with you, take it as a blessing. try and relax, eat well, and relax.
Go for a massage or reiki therapy if you want. either will help ease your stress
Rubbed snout?
My Chinese Water Dragon has a slightly damaged snout from rubbing it against the glass of the cage, so I took care of it by placing a backdrop of a forest on the back and sides, as he never rubs it on the front glass. Anyway, I was wondering if the damaged skin would grow back? I mean, it's hardly there, but you can tell he began rubbing it.
Rubbed snout?
It should grow back - most reptiles can regenerate skin...and even their tail if it gets bit off.
Reply:His skin should be fine. Does he shed?? I'm not really familiar with them. I had an iguana and when he was shedding/getting ready too, he too, rubbed his snout against the glass. It must make them feel better.?.
Reply:The damaged skin will grow back. It will scab over and then heal. Depending on how bad the damage is, there could be a permanent mark there from now on. As he sheds each time the appearance of the rub mark should improve. If he should start rubbing on the front glass you will have to put something on the front glass as well to keep him from rubbing. Great solution with the backdrop and quick thinking too!
Reply:Here is an excellent link on snout rubbing in CWD's. A common problem unfortunately.
http://www.triciaswaterdragon.com/snout....
Reply:hellooooooo again nice to see you! oh looks like ou dont know everything! %26gt;[ his skin will be fine they can grow it bak easyit wil scab then heal =] well actually depends but if its not 2 bad then thats wut will happen
Reply:he'll heal just fine, but there's probably gonna be a permanent something on his nose. SOME lizards regenerate everything, but it's a SERIOUS misconception hat they all do. pretty much anything under the 'dragon' name won't. if beardies or waters loose their tails, that's it for them.
my water dragon had a bit of snout damage from ages ago, and thugh it's healed beautifully, there's always gonna be a mark. i kind of like it though, he kind of looks like he's got his lips puckered and ready to kiss you.
golden ball
Rubbed snout?
It should grow back - most reptiles can regenerate skin...and even their tail if it gets bit off.
Reply:His skin should be fine. Does he shed?? I'm not really familiar with them. I had an iguana and when he was shedding/getting ready too, he too, rubbed his snout against the glass. It must make them feel better.?.
Reply:The damaged skin will grow back. It will scab over and then heal. Depending on how bad the damage is, there could be a permanent mark there from now on. As he sheds each time the appearance of the rub mark should improve. If he should start rubbing on the front glass you will have to put something on the front glass as well to keep him from rubbing. Great solution with the backdrop and quick thinking too!
Reply:Here is an excellent link on snout rubbing in CWD's. A common problem unfortunately.
http://www.triciaswaterdragon.com/snout....
Reply:hellooooooo again nice to see you! oh looks like ou dont know everything! %26gt;[ his skin will be fine they can grow it bak easyit wil scab then heal =] well actually depends but if its not 2 bad then thats wut will happen
Reply:he'll heal just fine, but there's probably gonna be a permanent something on his nose. SOME lizards regenerate everything, but it's a SERIOUS misconception hat they all do. pretty much anything under the 'dragon' name won't. if beardies or waters loose their tails, that's it for them.
my water dragon had a bit of snout damage from ages ago, and thugh it's healed beautifully, there's always gonna be a mark. i kind of like it though, he kind of looks like he's got his lips puckered and ready to kiss you.
golden ball
How is this poem...................?
Can you say which lines are good and which are bad. And how can I improve ?
The inner fire burns without any flame
Anger, hatred and envy being firewood
Witheld, it gathers in the murky depths
light load grows hidden into heavy burden
fumes creates a most a ferocious monster
Infant fed a foul tasting milk from creator
Beneath stable soil flows red boiling magma
It seeks not but struggles for life given air
The father is devoured from the inside
A great battle and one is killed, suffocated
Chains broken, unbound it breaches the walls
All consumed, remains only a soft skin covering
Curtains are torn apart and terror begins
Calm cloud was father and lightening his son
Strike does fear as furious flames ignite
All reduced to ashes before dragon can die
Then shall the skies clear and heavens open
Ressurected, one lives again and breathes once more, his last
How is this poem...................?
Your Poem is lovely....Ii expresses reality as it is... But it sounds a litlle prosaic...try to use more flowery language and ofcourse try to divide your poem into equal stanzas.
Besides these ur poem is great.
Reply:All the poem lines is good, try to wright more poems and publish to web..
All the best
Reply:it's too sentimental but if u r a more sensible guy u will success with ur opera.
Reply:good
Reply:good one but i didn't understand it
Reply:it was very very very very very very very very very very good.
keep writting such poems
The inner fire burns without any flame
Anger, hatred and envy being firewood
Witheld, it gathers in the murky depths
light load grows hidden into heavy burden
fumes creates a most a ferocious monster
Infant fed a foul tasting milk from creator
Beneath stable soil flows red boiling magma
It seeks not but struggles for life given air
The father is devoured from the inside
A great battle and one is killed, suffocated
Chains broken, unbound it breaches the walls
All consumed, remains only a soft skin covering
Curtains are torn apart and terror begins
Calm cloud was father and lightening his son
Strike does fear as furious flames ignite
All reduced to ashes before dragon can die
Then shall the skies clear and heavens open
Ressurected, one lives again and breathes once more, his last
How is this poem...................?
Your Poem is lovely....Ii expresses reality as it is... But it sounds a litlle prosaic...try to use more flowery language and ofcourse try to divide your poem into equal stanzas.
Besides these ur poem is great.
Reply:All the poem lines is good, try to wright more poems and publish to web..
All the best
Reply:it's too sentimental but if u r a more sensible guy u will success with ur opera.
Reply:good
Reply:good one but i didn't understand it
Reply:it was very very very very very very very very very very good.
keep writting such poems
WTTF WTF SUMONE HELP please...?
my bearded dragon hasnt eaten in a while. i just bought it a new tank much bigger than the other one it was in, %26amp; fed him some crickets %26amp; superworms with calcium.
%26amp; hes been acting weird ever since i put him in...
he has a purple tint to his skin on his tail %26amp; around his face
%26amp; once in a while he'll go crazy %26amp; attack the glass of the tank as if theres somthing there. then he'll stop %26amp; twitch his his up %26amp; down, up %26amp; down. then stops %26amp; doesn nothing... :S
its starting to worry me. Any suggestions of whats wrong ?
WTTF WTF SUMONE HELP please...?
wtf i donno eather i have a snake and it doesnt do that. i think you should call a vet and find out. i hope i goes well for you
Reply:is he shedding?? i have heard that most reptiles wont eat while they are shedding, could that be why he has wierd coloring?? searchonline for pictures of shedding bearded dragons (if you have never seen him shed before) if you are still at a loss of whats going on find a reptile vet in your area and call them, either get him in there or ask them what you can do.
good luck, i hope he gets better soon!!!
clear weed
%26amp; hes been acting weird ever since i put him in...
he has a purple tint to his skin on his tail %26amp; around his face
%26amp; once in a while he'll go crazy %26amp; attack the glass of the tank as if theres somthing there. then he'll stop %26amp; twitch his his up %26amp; down, up %26amp; down. then stops %26amp; doesn nothing... :S
its starting to worry me. Any suggestions of whats wrong ?
WTTF WTF SUMONE HELP please...?
wtf i donno eather i have a snake and it doesnt do that. i think you should call a vet and find out. i hope i goes well for you
Reply:is he shedding?? i have heard that most reptiles wont eat while they are shedding, could that be why he has wierd coloring?? searchonline for pictures of shedding bearded dragons (if you have never seen him shed before) if you are still at a loss of whats going on find a reptile vet in your area and call them, either get him in there or ask them what you can do.
good luck, i hope he gets better soon!!!
clear weed
What do you all think about these new possible prophecies?
what if the baby called jesus is really named josiah?
what if the circumsition means, giving up the flesh, meaning the temple that is worshiping the gods of the earth. ex. money, sex, alcohol, drugs. and that four skin is the fleshy body not able to sustain life with out spirit first. holy spiririt.
what if the dragon the old serpent, is grown addictions
what if the crying in the wilderness was someone suffering for the decieved man kind to the day of the woman revelation that reveils the truth of what the bible really says.
what if jesus comment i will be with you till the end, means the moment he goes from spirit to flesh when he reincarnates.
the end of time- the clocks go bye bye time stands still in each individuals world and when you are to do something its when god say s you should do it. because you have connected with the ancient spirits and they will guide you.
what is th e white stone was -----.
what if the daughter of zion -someone in touch with the unseen world the
What do you all think about these new possible prophecies?
You put just as much thought into that as my response.
Reply:God stopped giving prophesies when the Bible was completed. See Revelation 22:18,19
Reply:Good luck with your catharsis, re religion. You will eventually work out some position you can live with, at least, until you learn more and have to do it again.
If, you require a high standard for what you choose to believe, you will have many of these periods on your path to understanding.
If,on the other hand, you choose the path of the multitude, you can find satisfaction rather quickly.
If your belief system satisfies you I suggest you do not apply this same reasoning process to, say,...dealing with explosives.
what if the circumsition means, giving up the flesh, meaning the temple that is worshiping the gods of the earth. ex. money, sex, alcohol, drugs. and that four skin is the fleshy body not able to sustain life with out spirit first. holy spiririt.
what if the dragon the old serpent, is grown addictions
what if the crying in the wilderness was someone suffering for the decieved man kind to the day of the woman revelation that reveils the truth of what the bible really says.
what if jesus comment i will be with you till the end, means the moment he goes from spirit to flesh when he reincarnates.
the end of time- the clocks go bye bye time stands still in each individuals world and when you are to do something its when god say s you should do it. because you have connected with the ancient spirits and they will guide you.
what is th e white stone was -----.
what if the daughter of zion -someone in touch with the unseen world the
What do you all think about these new possible prophecies?
You put just as much thought into that as my response.
Reply:God stopped giving prophesies when the Bible was completed. See Revelation 22:18,19
Reply:Good luck with your catharsis, re religion. You will eventually work out some position you can live with, at least, until you learn more and have to do it again.
If, you require a high standard for what you choose to believe, you will have many of these periods on your path to understanding.
If,on the other hand, you choose the path of the multitude, you can find satisfaction rather quickly.
If your belief system satisfies you I suggest you do not apply this same reasoning process to, say,...dealing with explosives.
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